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My Friend Showed Up Naked and Won the Bet

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Sofía had been sitting in front of the computer screen for more than two hours, surrounded by the smell of coffee going cold in the cup and the wax of a bergamot candle burning on the shelf. The living room of the flat they shared in the university district had that heavy autumn-afternoon atmosphere, with rain tapping against the windows and the desk lamp casting a warm circle over the notes.

Nadia was stretched out on the sofa, staring at the ceiling with the expression of someone pretending not to be bored.

—Are you still working on that Velázquez paper? —she asked, tossing a cushion into the air and catching it.

—Almost done —Sofía said without taking her eyes off the text—. The professor wants a full analysis of Las Meninas. He expects me to interpret every plane of light as if I’d been there when they painted it.

—You’ve been telling me “almost done” since six in the evening. —Nadia sat up, resting her elbows on her thighs—. I’ve got something better than Velázquez.

Sofía lifted her head.

—Look. —Nadia reached for her phone on the side table and swiped across the screen—. It just went up in the Fine Arts group.

Sofía leaned over to read. The invitation had a black background with gold lettering: “THE COSTUME PARTY OF THE YEAR. SATURDAY, 10 P.M. THEME: GODS AND MORTALS. ONLY FOR THOSE WHO DARE. LOCATION: THE INITIATED ALREADY KNOW WHERE.”

—Whose is this? —Sofía asked.

—Marcos’s. The purple-haired guy who organizes the faculty events. They say he set up something in a warehouse at the port last year that people are still talking about.

Sofía shut the laptop with a snap.

—We’re going. No discussion.

—I knew you’d say that. —Nadia smiled—. But before you get too excited, I’m proposing a bet.

—What bet?

Nadia pressed her fingertips together like a conspirator. —Whoever wears the most daring costume wins the right to brag for the whole month. And the other one has to do the dishes that week.

Sofía burst out laughing. —Accepted. But get ready to lose, because what I’ve got in mind is going to make everything you’ve ever seen look ridiculous.

—We’ll see on Saturday —Nadia said, getting up from the sofa with a smile Sofía wasn’t quite sure how to read.

***

The following days passed in a kind of domestic cold war. Boxes arrived at the flat and disappeared straight into their rooms. One afternoon, Sofía heard the whir of a sewing machine Nadia had taken out of the closet after months of not using it. Another afternoon, Nadia came home with a long cardboard tube she tucked away before Sofía could ask her anything.

—What’s that? —Sofía said from the kitchen.

—Strategic components —Nadia replied, closing her bedroom door.

Sofía spent three afternoons transforming a gray skirt she’d bought at the flea market. She shortened it to a scandalous length, added darts at the back to shape the silhouette, and opened a side seam that climbed almost to the hip. The white silk blouse, almost sheer, with a lace collar, she’d found in a secondhand shop. The white thigh-high stockings, the black lace garter belt, the patent-leather heels with a buckle. Everything calculated, everything meant to win.

On Friday night, with excitement already lodged in her chest, Sofía went out to the living room and found Nadia watching a series.

—Nervous? —Nadia whispered without looking away from the screen.

—Not at all —Sofía lied.

—You should be —Nadia said, and switched channels.

***

Saturday arrived with a golden late-afternoon light slipping through the blinds. At seven, both of them locked themselves in their respective rooms. Sofía dressed slowly, enjoying every piece. The silk blouse against her skin. The ridiculously short skirt, perfectly fitted. The stockings pulled up centimeter by centimeter, the garter belt sitting just below the edge of the fabric. The stiletto heels. The high pigtails, symmetrical. The black-framed glasses with no lenses. The makeup: big eyes lined dark, cherry gloss on her lips.

She looked at herself in the full-length mirror. The contradiction was exactly what she wanted: the almost virginal whiteness of the blouse against the obscenity of the skirt, the schoolgirl suggestion against the provocation of the heels. She smiled, satisfied. The bet was practically won.

She opened the door with a theatrical flourish.

—Nadia, get ready to surrender! The winner has arrived and…

The sentence cut off cleanly.

Nadia was in the doorway of her room. And Nadia wasn’t wearing anything.

It took Sofía several seconds to process what was in front of her. Her mind, which had spent days building the illusion of her own triumph, went blank. Nadia was completely naked, not a single centimeter of fabric, no strategic adornment, nothing. Just her skin, golden from the summer that had just ended, smooth and flawless, gleaming in the hallway light.

Her dark hair fell in long waves over her shoulders and chest, casually covering one nipple while the other showed with absolute calm, pink, already hardened by the cool air in the hall. Her body was one continuous line: delicate shoulders, narrow waist, wide hips, long legs ending in bare feet on the tiled floor. The flat stomach, the navel, the pussy shaved with precision, the lips pressed together, showing only the faint pink line dividing them. There was nothing Sofía’s eyes could not see.

But what turned it into a costume was what she wore over that skin. A dark leather quiver, with geometric carvings, crossed her torso, held by a strap that ran between her breasts and around her waist. The strap pressed just under her tits, lifting them slightly, making them stand out even more. Three arrow feathers stuck out from the quiver. In her right hand, a long bow of polished wood, resting on the floor like a scepter. The makeup was earth and gold, subtle, almost primal. Her dark eyes watched Sofía with an expression of serene amusement.

—Artemis —Nadia said quietly—. Goddess of the hunt and the moon. Do you still think I’m the loser?

Sofía opened her mouth. Closed it. Opened it again. She felt a sudden heat rising up her neck, a tingling between her thighs she didn’t know how to name. She’d lived with Nadia for years, had seen her in her underwear a hundred times, coming out of the shower with the towel badly wrapped, changing in front of her without ceremony. But this was something else. This was Nadia offering herself whole to the gaze, and her own body answering with a warm wetness that had already started soaking her lace panties under the scandalously short skirt.

—Jesus Christ —was all she managed.

—Thank you —Nadia said with a calm smile—. Shall we go?

***

The venue was an old industrial warehouse on the outskirts, its exposed brick walls lit from outside by changing colored spotlights. The music throbbed from inside with a force you could feel in your chest before you even entered. The line was full of all kinds of bodies: fairies with glowing wings, suited skeletons, Egyptian gods with golden wigs, space pirates.

They got out of the car. Sofía could already feel the stares. Her costume worked; the pigtails and heels were immediate eye-catchers. But when Nadia got out of the passenger seat and stood up beside the car, the whole line went still.

There was no immediate reaction. First silence. Then eyes. Then elbows into the ribs of the person next to them. Then whispers. Nadia walked toward the entrance with her head held high and the bow in her hand, her posture as natural as if she were wearing the season’s most elegant coat. Her nakedness had nothing vulnerable about it. It was a statement.

Sofía walked beside her, feeling something hard to describe: pride, astonishment, and something like what you feel when you’re accompanying someone who has just done something you never could have done.

The organizer, Marcos, was at the entrance in a burgundy velvet jacket, his hair dyed purple. When he saw them, he stepped away from the group he’d been talking to.

—This —he said, gesturing at Nadia in a sweep that took in all of her— is the bravest thing I’ve seen in five years of throwing parties.

—It’s a costume —Nadia said.

—Of course it is —Marcos replied, laughing—. Come in, come in.

***

Inside was a maze of smoke machines, neon lights, and music pounding against the ribs. The dance floor was a sea of extravagant costumes: jellyfish with plastic snakes in their hair, period vampires, fallen angels, satyrs with golden horns. It was a visual spectacle that under any other circumstances would have been overwhelming.

But Nadia was the center of gravity of everything.

People stopped dancing when she passed. Groups opened up. It wasn’t morbid curiosity; it was something closer to the respectful awe that comes from seeing something beyond scale. Nadia’s skin under the colored lights—the fuchsia sliding over her shoulder, the blue settling on her hips, the green tracing the curve of her back—created an almost sculptural effect. The dark leather of the quiver and the wooden bow completed an image that didn’t seem entirely real.

—Are you seeing this? —Sofía whispered in her ear as they walked toward the bar.

—I’m trying not to notice it too much —Nadia replied, but there was something warm, almost shy, in her voice that Sofía found unexpectedly endearing.

They ordered two gin and tonics. A guy dressed as Poseidon, with his trident tilted and a plastic seaweed headband slipping down his forehead, came over to buy them one.

—Can I...? I mean, can I get you both a drink?

—How kind —Sofía said—. Two with lots of lime.

The night moved forward in that particular way good nights do: without anyone deciding it, everything just flows toward somewhere. Sofía became the point of contact. The jellyfish asked where she’d bought the stockings. A guy with a laurel crown asked her to dance. She turned down the second drink but accepted the third, and her hips started following the rhythm without her consciously deciding to. The tiny skirt fluttered around her as she danced, and her pigtails bounced in time, and her eyes, behind the lensless glasses, sparkled with amusement.

Nadia, for her part, had become a point of reference. People approached her with a kind of ceremonial caution. A girl dressed as Cleopatra asked if she was cold.

—No —Nadia replied—. The moon keeps me warm. It’s one of the privileges of being immortal.

***

At one point, the music cut off abruptly. The strobe lights went dark and a single white spotlight came on in the center of the floor. Marcos appeared on a small improvised stage with a microphone, now wearing a pharaoh’s cape over the burgundy jacket.

—Attention, mortals, gods, and creatures of the night! The costume contest has arrived.

The crowd cheered.

—Tonight we’ve seen everything. Gods, monsters, legends of Olympus and the underworld. But among all the costumes that have passed through this warehouse, there’s one that isn’t a costume. It’s a declaration. An act of pure confidence that none of us will forget.

The spotlight began to move slowly across the crowd. People turned, expecting to be lit up. Sofía felt one last competitive reflex that vanished almost before it appeared. She knew perfectly well where that light would land.

Nadia was standing beside a brick column, her drink in hand and the bow resting on her shoulder. The white light fell on her and turned her into something else: marble, a statue, something that seemed to have existed before the party, before the warehouse, before even the two of them. For a moment there was no sound in the whole building.

—Artemis! —Marcos proclaimed—. The undisputed winner of the night!

The noise that followed was physical. Applause, shouts, Poseidon’s trident waving in the air. Sofía shouted louder than anyone, her palms already aching before the first second was over. Nadia blinked, surprised by the intensity of the reaction, and then smiled. A slow, genuine smile Sofía knew well: the one Nadia wore when she was truly happy, not just satisfied.

She walked to the stage through the parting crowd, unhurried, the bow in her hand as if it had always been that way. She climbed the steps. Marcos handed her a huge plastic cup full of a golden, glittering liquid.

Nadia lifted the cup. Her eyes searched for Sofía in the crowd. When they found her, they looked only at her. The silent toast they exchanged was worth more than all the applause put together.

***

By around four in the morning, when the party was beginning to lose pressure and the first groups were heading out into the cold street, Sofía found Nadia by the back wall, sipping what was left of her drink.

—Do you want to go home? —Sofía asked.

Nadia nodded with a slowness that suggested happy exhaustion.

—Take me home.

The goodbye was long. People wanted photos, hugs, thanks for something they couldn’t quite define. Nadia posed patiently for everyone who asked, the bow always in her hand, as if it were a real attribute she had no intention of giving up.

In the car, the silence of the night city replaced the warehouse noise. The streets were empty under the orange glow of the streetlamps. Nadia reclined in the seat with her eyes half-closed, the bow resting between her legs. Sofía glanced at her out of the corner of her eye as she drove. The streetlights slid over her in orange bands, lighting up one breast, then her stomach, then the naked, perfectly shaved cunt that opened slightly in her relaxed posture. Sofía tightened her grip on the steering wheel and felt that warm wetness between her legs again, more insistent than before.

—You won —Sofía said, looking at the road.

—I know —Nadia replied. And there was something in her voice beyond the satisfaction of winning a house bet.

They got back to the flat. They climbed the stairs in silence, Sofía’s heels clicking softly on the steps and Nadia’s bare feet making no sound. Inside, they closed the door and the world stayed outside.

Nadia leaned the bow and quiver carefully against the living-room wall, like someone putting away their weapons after a long expedition. When she unfastened the leather strap that crossed her torso, red marks were left across her skin between her breasts, two slightly indented lines running from her right shoulder to her left hip. Sofía took off her heels, undid her pigtails, and set her glasses on the table. The two of them remained in the living room under the soft light of the lamp they’d forgotten to turn off, looking at each other without saying anything.

They were no longer the schoolgirl and the goddess. They were just Sofía and Nadia, tired, their ears still ringing with music and something warm settled in their chests that had no precise name.

—What’s the best part of winning? —Sofía asked.

Nadia shrugged with a smile.

—That you were there to see it.

Sofía didn’t answer. She looked at her. Really looked at her, for the first time all night, without the distraction of the crowd or the lights. And Nadia looked back, and in that look there was a question that had been floating between the two of them for hours, maybe days, maybe years.

—All night —Sofía said, her voice rougher than she intended— I’ve been getting wet looking at you.

Nadia went very still. Then she smiled, slowly, with the same slow, genuine smile she’d had when she stepped onto the stage.

—Me too —she said—. The whole costume was for you.

Sofía closed her eyes for an instant. When she opened them, Nadia was moving closer. Bare feet on the parquet, her whole naked body walking toward her as if she were still under the white spotlight. Nadia put a hand on Sofía’s cheek, slid it down her neck, along the edge of the white silk blouse.

—Can I? —she asked, her fingers already on the first button.

—Fuck me —Sofía said, and she was surprised by how directly the words came out, the first time she’d ever said them to another woman.

Nadia undid her blouse button by button, unhurried, and each time she opened one she lowered her head and kissed the skin that was being exposed. The curve where her breasts began. The center of her sternum. Her stomach. When she was done, she slid the silk off Sofía’s shoulders and the blouse fell to the floor with a whisper. Sofía wasn’t wearing a bra; her breasts, smaller than Nadia’s but firm, were left bare with the nipples already hard, pointing upward.

—Fuck —murmured Nadia—. I’ve been imagining these tits for years.

She crouched and closed her mouth over the right nipple. Sofía moaned loudly, unable to hold it back, her hands sinking into Nadia’s dark hair. Nadia’s tongue circled her nipple, sucked it, nibbled it gently, and Sofía felt the tug straight between her legs, as if an invisible thread connected her nipple to her clit. Nadia moved to the other breast, sucking harder this time, and Sofía threw her head back and moaned Nadia’s name for the first time like that.

Nadia’s hands went down to the ridiculously short skirt. She unfastened it from behind and let it fall. Sofía was left in black lace panties, white thigh-high stockings, and the garter belt. Nadia pulled back for a moment to look at her in full.

—Don’t take off the stockings —she said—. Or the garter belt. Just the panties.

She knelt down. Sofía felt Nadia’s hands moving up her thighs over the stockings, then to bare skin, then to the edge of her panties. Nadia hooked her thumbs into the elastic and began to lower them very slowly. The lace clung for an instant to her wet pussy before peeling away with a small damp sound that made both of them smile.

—You’re soaked —Nadia said, her mouth a hair’s breadth from Sofía’s sex—. Look at you.

—Shut up and lick me —Sofía panted.

Nadia laughed under her breath and spread her thighs with her palms. She ran her whole tongue over her first, from bottom to top, once, long and slow, tasting her. Sofía let out a muffled cry and had to brace herself on the back of the sofa so she wouldn’t fall. Nadia did it again, this time using the tip of her tongue to open her lips, sliding it a little between them. She paused on the clit and circled it slowly, drawing precise loops, not quite touching it, until Sofía started moving her hips in search of friction.

—Please —Sofía whispered—. Please.

Nadia closed her lips over the clit and sucked it. Sofía screamed. Nadia kept sucking, alternating suction with quick licks, and at the same time lifted one hand and pushed two fingers into her pussy. She was so wet they went in all at once, up to the knuckle. Sofía grabbed Nadia’s hair with both hands.

—Yes, yes, like that, deeper, fuck, yes —she panted, unable to stop talking.

Nadia started fucking her with her fingers, in and out, while continuing to eat her pussy with her mouth. She curved her fingers upward, searching for the rough spot just behind the bone, and when she found it and pressed firmly there, Sofía felt her legs trembling so hard she wasn’t going to be able to hold herself up much longer.

—I’m going to come —she warned.

Nadia moaned against her cunt, the vibration multiplying the sensation, and sped up. Fingers going in and out, tongue on her clit, free hand gripping one ass cheek and digging in with her nails. Sofía came with a long cry, pushing her hips against Nadia’s face, feeling the orgasm break through her stomach in waves that reached all the way to her nipples. Nadia didn’t stop. She kept sucking and fingering her while Sofía came, stretching the orgasm until Sofía had to pull her head away because she couldn’t take any more pleasure.

Nadia stood up from the floor with a shiny mouth and a wet chin. She licked her lips without taking her eyes off Sofía.

—You taste fucking divine —she said.

Sofía grabbed the back of her neck and kissed her. She kissed herself in Nadia’s mouth, felt her own flavor on the other woman’s tongue, and it seemed like the dirtiest and most intimate kiss she had ever given. She bit Nadia’s lip. Pulled back, panting.

—To the bedroom —she said—. Now.

They walked down the hall, Sofía still in the white stockings and lace garter belt, Nadia completely naked from the start. They fell onto Nadia’s bed tangled together. Sofía got on top. She started kissing her neck, then her breasts, closing her mouth over Nadia’s pink nipples, sucking hungrily, biting them until she drew a gasp.

—You’ve been showing off for hours —she said in Nadia’s ear—. Now it’s your turn.

Nadia laughed, but the laugh broke when Sofía ran her tongue over her navel and kept going down. Nadia’s cunt was already shining, swollen, the lips slightly parted to reveal the dark pink inside. Sofía had never licked a pussy before and for a second she hesitated. Then she thought about the way Nadia had looked at her all night, about how she’d stripped naked for her, and she didn’t hesitate anymore.

She lowered her head and licked slowly, testing. The taste was intense, salty, with something sweet underneath. She liked it. She licked again, more sure of herself, and again, until she found Nadia’s clit with the tip of her tongue. Nadia moaned and grabbed her head with both hands.

—Fuck, Sofi, yes, there, don’t move from there.

Sofía stayed there. She sucked Nadia’s clit the way hers had been sucked, imitating what she’d liked, circling her tongue, alternating with gentle suction. Nadia answered with her hips, lifting them against her mouth. Sofía dared to raise a hand and slide a finger inside. Nadia was very wet and very hot inside; the finger went in without resistance. She slipped in a second. Nadia moaned louder.

—Faster —she begged—. Faster with your tongue, and shove them in, fuck, deeper.

Sofía obeyed. She quickened her tongue over the swollen clit and started fucking her with two fingers, curling them upward the way Nadia had done with her. She found the rough spot right away. She pressed there, pushing in and out, while her tongue never stopped on the clit. Nadia arched her whole back. Her breasts tightened upward, nipples pointing at the ceiling.

—I’m going to come, Sofi, I’m going to come all over you.

Sofía sucked harder. Nadia came with a hoarse cry, clamping her thighs around Sofía’s head, grabbing her hair with both hands. Sofía felt Nadia’s pussy contracting rhythmically around her fingers, squeezing them in spasms that lasted far longer than she’d expected. When Nadia finally let her go, Sofía climbed up Nadia’s body, leaving a trail of wet kisses, and let herself fall beside her.

They looked at each other. Both of them panting, both faces wet with sweat and sex, both of them wearing that stupid smile people get when they’ve just discovered something important.

—We’re not done —said Nadia.

—Not even close —Sofía answered.

Nadia turned toward her and kissed her again, and this time the kiss was no longer one of discovery but of possession. Nadia got on top of Sofía, opened her legs with one knee, and settled between them so that their cunts met, lips to lips, both soaked. She started moving. Their clits rubbed with every motion, and the friction was so direct, so intimate, that a long moan escaped Sofía from deep in her chest.

—Like that, Nadi, Jesus, like that.

Nadia braced herself on her hands above her and set the rhythm. Her tits hung just above Sofía’s face, and Sofía lifted her head and caught one nipple in her mouth without stopping the movement of her hips against Nadia’s. Their two cunts slid against each other, soaking the sheets, making a wet, rhythmic sound that filled the room along with both their gasps.

—I’m going again —Sofía panted—. It can’t be this fast but I’m going again.

—Me too —said Nadia, clenching her teeth—. Together.

They moved faster, harder, searching for the exact angle. Sofía dug her fingers into Nadia’s ass, pushing her against her. They came almost at the same time, with two cries that overlapped in the same air, and kept moving slowly while the orgasm ran through their bodies, spending them completely.

Nadia collapsed on top of her. Sofía wrapped her arms around her. They stayed like that for a long time, breathing, feeling the other’s heart gradually slow down.

—All night I kept thinking I wanted you to be the one looking at me —Nadia murmured against her neck—. Only you.

—I already did —Sofía replied—. And I’m not stopping now.

They fell asleep wrapped around each other, Sofía’s white stockings still on and Artemis’s bow resting against the living-room wall, guarding the silence of the flat while the city outside dawned.

The bet had been the catalyst. What remained after it, that warm nameless feeling, finally had a name.

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