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A Game Under the Blanket on the Night Bus

The idea for the trip was his, like almost all the good ideas. We’d spent months locked into the city routine—the work, the same bars, the same plans as always—and when he announced one afternoon that he’d booked a hostel in a mountain spa town a little over five hours away, I couldn’t find a single argument against it. What I hadn’t expected was the mode of transport: my bike had been in the shop for two weeks, he didn’t drive, and plane tickets for a short weekend seemed like an unnecessary expense. So we ended up at the bus terminal at ten at night, with medium-sized backpacks and a carry-on he’d insisted on packing with “everything we’d need for the trip,” including a light blanket, some saltines, and a pair of earbuds he never used.

The bus left ten minutes late. We looked for the seats in the back, the ones that recline a couple of centimeters more than the others, and settled in by the window. Outside there was still some city light left, but by the time we hit the interstate it was nothing but darkness and the red taillights of the trucks we were leaving behind. The engine hummed steadily, almost hypnotically. A baby cried somewhere in the front half of the bus. Then it went quiet, and the bus settled into that dense, anonymous silence that only exists at night on long trips.

***

By the first hour of the ride the air conditioning kicked in for real. Not gradually: all at once. The kind of cold that makes you regret wearing thin pants and not bringing thicker socks. He complained under his breath, I pulled the blanket out of the bag, and we covered ourselves without thinking much about it. He immediately settled against me, his head on my shoulder and his legs stretched toward the seat in front. Most of the other passengers were already asleep or staring at their phones through their headphones. Nobody was paying attention to us.

I was almost at that half-dreaming point where you’re neither asleep nor awake when I felt his hand searching for mine under the blanket. I took it without thinking, but he didn’t stop there: he guided it slowly, with clear intent, toward his hip and placed it over his pants, right where the curve of his ass began.

“Guess what I’ve got on underneath,” he whispered.

I opened my eyes a little wider.

“Now?” I answered very quietly.

“Now. If you get it right, you can put your hand right in.”

I pressed my fingers, trying to feel through the fabric. The cloth was thin. Underneath there was something soft, not the thick cotton of a normal boxer brief.

“A thong,” I said.

“Good. What color?”

I thought about it. That morning we’d done laundry together, both of us throwing our clothes into the same load because we were short on time before leaving. I remembered seeing him fold a blue thong he said went with anything. He’d left the green one unfolded in the hamper.

“Blue,” I said.

He didn’t answer right away. Then he opened one eye and looked at me sidelong, weighing whether I’d cheated somehow.

“Yeah.”

Slowly—without any sudden movement, without anything that might catch the attention of the seats in front—I slipped my hand under the waistband of his pants. The blanket covered everything. He didn’t move. He only breathed a little more slowly than before.

I found the fabric, a tiny triangle of nylon that barely covered his hole. I traced the edge with my fingers from his hip to the center, then lower, following the crack of his ass until I found the taut string wedged between his cheeks. I moved it aside with two fingers and left his hole exposed under the blanket. I started making soft circles with the pad of my index finger over his anus, barely pressing, feeling it pucker and relax every time I touched him. His breathing changed. Not much, but enough for me to notice clearly.

I sucked my middle finger discreetly, hiding my hand inside the blanket, and went back down. I slid it in up to the first knuckle. He was hot and tight, and I felt the muscle close around my finger as if it didn’t want to let it out. He turned his face against my shoulder to muffle any sound. I pushed a little farther, to the second knuckle, and started moving it slowly, in and out with a minimal rhythm that barely made the blanket shift.

“Motherfucker,” he whispered against my neck, out of breath. “Not here.”

“You started it,” I whispered back in his ear.

With my other hand, the one I had free, I slipped it under the blanket toward the front and found his cock over the thong. It was already hard, pulling up against the elastic, the tip peeking over the edge. I wrapped my fingers over the fabric and squeezed gently, feeling the hot, wet bulge at the tip. A passenger coughed three rows ahead. We both stayed still for a second, my finger still inside him and my other hand closed around his cock. Nobody looked back.

I kept going. I pulled the thong down a little under the blanket, enough to free his cock against his belly, and started jerking him off with slow, long strokes while the finger stayed buried in his ass, opening him just enough. He clenched his teeth. I could feel him swallowing. The head leaked and wet my palm; I used the slick to make my strokes easier, circling the glans with my thumb each time I came back up.

We stayed like that for a good while. The bus rolled on. The interior lights were off. Outside, the fields were pitch-black, broken only by the occasional distant town that flashed by in two seconds and vanished.

“Enough,” he whispered at last, his voice broken. “Enough. Take it out.”

“What?”

“I said enough. Stop. I’m going to cum right here and I can’t get to the hotel like this, with a stain on my pants.”

I withdrew my finger slowly and let go of his cock, settling it against his belly and pulling his thong back up carefully so the fabric could contain what was dripping. I settled back in my seat with a smile I didn’t bother to hide. It took him several minutes to breathe normally again before he truly fell asleep, his head still on my shoulder and the blanket covering us to the waist.

***

We arrived at the spa town just after dawn, with orange and pink light still hanging over the mountains in the distance. The terminal was small, the kind with a single platform and a café that opens at seven. We had a quick coffee there, each with a medialuna, before walking the two blocks to the hostel. The streets were almost empty at that hour. A dog followed us for half a block with little enthusiasm and then sat down on the corner.

The place was considerably better than we’d expected. A well-kept colonial building, with white walls and dark green painted wooden windows. The room they gave us was on the third floor: a double bed, a private bathroom with good water pressure, and a window looking straight out onto a pine forest with a river in the distance. If you left it slightly open, the sound of the water came clearly inside.

I arrived exhausted. Three broken hours of sleep on a bus aren’t enough for anyone, and the terminal coffee hadn’t done much either. I dropped my backpack where it fell, took off my sneakers, and flopped onto the bed without making it.

“Aren’t you even going to wash your face?” he asked from the bathroom.

“Later,” I said, and closed my eyes.

I slept for almost two straight hours. When I opened my eyes, he was sitting on the edge of the bed, reading something on his phone. Morning light was coming through the window and lighting up his profile. He had that look of concentration he gets when he’s genuinely interested in something: jaw slightly set, brow just faintly furrowed.

“There’s a restaurant three blocks away that looks really good,” he said without looking at me. “Are you hungry?”

“Give me five minutes.”

***

We had lunch slowly, without rushing. He ordered vegetable soup with toast; I got a huge sandwich and ended up leaving half of it because it was too much. We had coffee in the square afterward, looked at the craft shops without going into any, and walked around the center a bit without any particular destination. It was a quiet Saturday. The town moved slowly, with that calm of places that don’t have anything urgent to solve.

When we got back to the hostel it was almost two in the afternoon.

We closed the room door.

I sat on the bed to take off my sneakers. He went straight into the bathroom, and I heard the tap turn on for a moment, the sound of water hitting the sink. When he came out, it took me a second to process what I was seeing: he was wearing one of my T-shirts—the gray one, the oldest one, the one that hangs loose on his shoulders and drapes asymmetrically—and the blue thong from the bus. That was all. The shirt reached halfway down his thighs, but when he moved it rode up and showed me the thong’s elastic cutting across his hips.

He stayed in the doorway, looking at me calmly.

“Lie down,” he said.

It wasn’t a question or a suggestion.

I stretched out on the bed with my pants still on. He came over, unbuttoned them himself with complete ease, pulled them down along with my underwear, and tossed them onto the floor without looking at them. My cock was already half-hard against my belly. He crouched beside the bed and took it in his hand, sizing it up in silence, squeezing at the base to watch it rise fully. Then he leaned in and took it into his mouth without warning, all the way down, until I felt his palate and throat clamping around the tip.

He pulled off, breathed, spat on the head, and went back down. He sucked slowly, sliding up and down with his tongue pressed to the underside of the shaft, leaving me completely wet. He stroked my balls with his free hand, gently squeezing them, and every so often he looked up at me from down there with wet eyes and my cock slipping in and out of his mouth. I put my hand on the back of his neck, not pushing, just letting it rest there.

“Like that,” I told him. “Deep.”

He went back down to the base, held there a few seconds with his throat closed around my cock, and pulled away with a thread of saliva hanging from his lip. I was dripping from top to bottom, shining in the window light.

“It’s ready,” he said, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand.

Then he climbed onto the bed and positioned himself over me, with his knees on either side of my hips and the weight of his body spread over mine. I felt the soft fabric of the thong against my skin, the warmth of his body, and by then I was rock hard, throbbing against his ass.

“I’m in charge today,” he said.

“Okay,” I replied, and said nothing else.

He shifted the thong aside with a practiced motion, leaving the string stuck to his groin and his ass bare. He grabbed my cock with one hand, set it at his entrance, and began easing himself down slowly, lowering himself with care. First the tip, carefully—I watched the head sink into him, the muscle give just a little and then open all at once as it took the crown—then he kept going in short, measured motions that made me want to thrust upward in desperation. I didn’t. I let him find his rhythm without interfering. He kept going down little by little, swallowing my cock centimeter by centimeter, mouth open and eyes half-closed.

When he had it all inside, he stayed still for a moment. He breathed deeply. I felt him adjusting, clenching around me with his whole ass, contracting the muscle around my cock as if measuring how much of it he could take. Then he started moving.

Riding was the word he liked to use, and I’d always found it exact: that was exactly what he was doing, torso upright, gray T-shirt hanging at his sides, hands braced on my chest to keep balance. He rose almost until the tip was out and came back down with all his weight, making my balls slap against his ass with a wet sound each time. He set the pace himself, with cadences that changed: sometimes fast for a while, pounding his prostate with short, furious thrusts, sometimes very slowly, almost pulling my cock out completely before swallowing it whole again, as if he were testing what he liked more in that exact moment. His cock, trapped under the shirt, moved hard against my belly and left a damp trail every time he pressed against me.

The sound in the room was his ragged breathing, the soft creak of the mattress, the wet slap of us fucking and, every so often, a short moan neither of us could quite hold back.

“God, your cock feels so good,” he murmured between thrusts without stopping. “Fills me all the way.”

“Keep going. Don’t stop.”

“I’m not stopping.”

At some point I noticed the curtain wasn’t fully closed. A strip of light was coming in from the right edge. I reached over to adjust it without interrupting him.

“Don’t move,” he said between breaths, tightening his ass around my cock to make it clear who was in charge.

“I was closing the curtain.”

“I know what you were doing. Stay still. Let me fuck you.”

I stayed still.

I grabbed his ass with both hands, spreading him open so I could watch myself going in and out of him, more out of instinct than any real attempt to direct anything. He looked down at me with an expression that left no room for doubt.

“No,” he said simply. “Hands still.”

I let go. I laid my hands back at my sides, without pressing, and surrendered completely to his rhythm. That was exactly what he wanted, and we both knew it.

He sped up. He grabbed his cock with one hand and started pounding it at the same pace he was moving on top of me, eyes closed and mouth open. Each time he came down, he clenched his ass harder, sealing me inside. He came before I did. I felt the hot stream spill onto my belly and chest in three or four long bursts while he kept moving without slowing down. His whole body trembled. A little of his cum was left hanging in my pubic hair.

“Your turn now,” he gasped, still riding me. “Finish in me. All of it.”

I felt myself close before I could reason it out. The constant warmth, the pressure, the rhythm he had imposed without negotiation, the muscle closing around me in a near-rhythmic way: all of it built up at once. I gripped his legs hard and drove up once, burying myself to the hilt, and came inside him in waves while he kept moving on top of me until the end, milking me with his ass, not pausing for a single second. I felt every jolt leave me and stay inside him.

Afterward he stayed still on top of me for a moment, his breathing still ragged and my cock still buried in him, throbbing. Then he slowly got up, letting my cock slip out with a wet sound, and moved to the side and positioned himself on all fours on the mattress, the thong still shoved aside and his ass pointed toward me.

He didn’t say anything. There was no need. With one hand he spread a cheek open and let me see my cum slowly seeping back out of him, a thick white thread sliding down his perineum and reaching his balls. We both knew that image—that what was left slowly leaking out from inside—was something I liked more than I was willing to say out loud, and that he knew it perfectly well and enjoyed it just as much. He stayed like that for a long while, offering it to me, until the last drop finished falling onto the sheet.

***

We stayed in bed for a long while without talking. The sound of the river came through the half-open window, constant and unbroken. The gray T-shirt ended up bunched among the sheets. At some point his hand found mine without either of us having to suggest it explicitly.

“We could stay tomorrow too,” he said to the ceiling.

“The return ticket’s already bought.”

“It can be changed.”

“We have to work Monday.”

He didn’t answer. He thought about it. So did I, more seriously than I expected.

“I’ll look into it,” I said at last.

At six in the evening his phone rang. It was a video call from his mom.

He answered from the bed, still with his hair mussed and the gray T-shirt on. I’d moved to the chair by the window, out of frame, looking toward the pine forest.

“How are you? How’s the place?” I heard her voice through the speaker.

“Really nice,” he answered. “Quiet. We’re resting a lot.”

I looked at the pines and thought about the distance that exists between what people imagine and what actually happens. That distance always seems enormous to me. It never seems as enormous as in moments exactly like that, sitting by a window with the smell of the mountain afternoon in the air and the sound of an ordinary conversation in the background.

The call lasted fifteen minutes. When he hung up, he stretched out on the bed and looked at me from there with that calm he gets afterward.

“Hungry?” he asked.

“A little.”

“I saw a market when we got in. Fruit, cheese, something to snack on tonight.”

I got up, found my pants on the floor, and put them on. He took another five minutes to get up, staring at the ceiling with that slow, unhurried way of his that sometimes drives me crazy and other times feels like the most reassuring thing in the world.

We went out at sunset. The mountain air smelled of wet earth and pine resin. We walked slowly through the stone streets without rushing, hands in our pockets and shoulders brushing now and then.

That night we changed the return tickets.

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