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Relatos Ardientes

What Happened with the Other Couple in the Jacuzzi

Marina and I had been wanting for months to get away for a weekend without the kids, work, or our phones. The hotel spa was at the end of a marble corridor on the ground floor, with a jacuzzi reserved for guests and a small indoor garden covered by a skylight. The reservation was for ten at night, and we were supposed to be alone.

The water welcomed us at just the right temperature, that point at which the body goes soft and the mind falls behind. Submerged lights tinted everything blue. Marina twisted her hair into a loose bun, let her head fall back against the stone edge, and closed her eyes. Her shoulder brushed mine. I watched the steam rise toward the ceiling like smoke from something burning slowly.

“Now this is a vacation,” she said without opening her eyes.

“Now this is,” I replied.

We had been together for six years. We had gone through phases, like every couple, but that night there was something different in the way she breathed. An expectation. Something she couldn’t quite let go of.

The door to the room opened and they came in. A man of about thirty-five, broad-backed, his hair still wet from his shower, and a blonde woman with the tanned skin of someone who had just returned from the coast. She wore a very small black bikini and carried a towel folded over her arm. He laughed at something she had said in the corridor, and his voice sounded deep and assured.

“Good evening,” he greeted us. “They told us the other jacuzzi was being serviced. Do you mind if we share this one?”

Marina opened her eyes for the first time in ten minutes. She looked at me for a second, just long enough for me to understand that she was leaving the decision to me. I shrugged beneath the water.

“Go ahead,” I replied.

They introduced themselves. His name was Andrés. Hers was Camila. They descended the three steps one at a time and settled opposite us. The water took a few seconds to return to its level. Camila stretched out her legs, and her feet appeared a hand’s breadth from mine, her toenails painted a dark burgundy that looked almost black beneath the blue light.

***

We began with the silly conversation strangers have in hot water. Where they were from. This and that. Andrés worked in something related to wineries. Camila taught yoga, which explained the way she sat with her knees folded to one side, perfectly comfortable. Marina answered in short but attentive phrases. I noticed that her foot had found mine beneath the water and was playing at settling on top of it, then beside it, then on top again, slowly.

I don’t know when I stopped looking at Andrés and started looking at Camila. Maybe it was when she leaned forward to reach the wineglass she had left on the edge and the bikini tightened over her breasts. Maybe it was earlier. The fact was that her foot had stayed very close to mine, and I didn’t want to move and break that accidental closeness.

Marina kept talking with Andrés. They were talking about travel. Marina laughed with a laugh I hadn’t heard at home in a long time, a laugh that came from her throat rather than her nose. I glanced at her. Her cheeks were flushed, though that could have been the heat of the water. It could have been anything.

I extended my leg an inch, and my big toe brushed the top of Camila’s foot.

It was so slight I could have denied it. I could have said “sorry” and withdrawn my foot. But she didn’t move. She kept talking to Marina about a market she had visited the year before, as though nothing were happening beneath the surface. Only, a second later, her foot answered: she curled her toes over mine, slowly, like someone checking whether what she had touched had been accidental or not.

It wasn’t accidental.

***

What came next was a silent dance. I let my foot travel up the side of her ankle, tracing a line toward her calf. She accepted the journey. When I reached her knee, she leaned back, resting her head against the edge, and turned her face toward Andrés as if giving him her full attention. But her leg had opened a little farther beneath the water, and that was a clearer answer than any words.

Marina noticed. I knew it by the way her foot, still pressed against mine, went very still. I looked up for hers and found it waiting for me. There was no reproach. There was something stranger and newer: a measured curiosity. The tiniest smile at one corner of her mouth.

And then Marina did what I hadn’t known how to read until that instant. She released my foot. She extended her left arm, the one closest to Andrés, and let her hand float beneath the water as if by accident, a hand’s breadth from his thigh. Andrés continued talking about grapes with his expression perfectly composed, but I noticed his knee move an inch closer to hers. Just an inch. Enough.

The air in the room grew denser. Or perhaps it was me. The steam continued rising from the surface in soft columns, and beneath the water something was happening that none of the four of us would ever name.

“Wine?” Andrés offered, lifting the bottle he had left on the edge.

“Please,” Marina said.

They each poured a glass, so close to each other that Andrés’s hand brushed her wrist as he passed her hers. Marina didn’t pull away. She thanked him while looking into his eyes for a second too long. I saw everything. I wanted to see it.

***

Camila’s foot was already on my thigh. It had risen without my noticing when, sliding up the inside of my leg with firm, unhurried pressure, measuring every inch. I clenched my teeth. My left hand searched for her ankle beneath the water and found it, and I held it there, not to stop it, but to possess it. I stroked the sole of her foot with my thumb, slowly, drawing circles. Camila bit her lower lip and disguised it with a comment about how heavily chlorinated the water was.

Marina was watching her with a different kind of attention now. As if she were studying her. Meanwhile, Andrés’s hand had found Marina’s waist beneath the water and stayed there, open and unmoving, waiting for a signal. Marina closed her eyes for a moment. When she opened them again, she looked straight at mine.

Is this okay? she asked me without opening her mouth.

I said nothing. I simply kept stroking Camila’s foot without taking my eyes off my girlfriend, and understood that the answer was that. That I wasn’t going to interrupt her. That I wanted to see how far it went without either of us saying a single thing.

Marina understood. She gave Andrés a long look, one of those looks you don’t give a stranger in a jacuzzi. And his hand, waiting at her waist, moved upward and slipped beneath the bikini tie, right where skin becomes softer.

Andrés barely moved the damp fabric aside with two fingers, and Marina didn’t resist. She let him do it, breathing more deeply, her chest rising and falling slowly. He caressed the edge of her bikini, brushing the folds of her hot sex through the fabric with his fingertip, and Marina opened her legs a little farther. I saw her belly tremble. I saw the tension in her jaw when he pressed two fingers a little more firmly, rubbing her pussy from outside, searching for the sensitive flesh. She brought one hand to the back of Andrés’s neck and gripped him there, as if to draw him closer, as if to tell him without words to keep going.

Camila used that same second to slide her foot up my crotch. It wasn’t an accidental brush: she passed it over my already-hard cock, slowly, feeling the bulge beneath my trunks. The air escaped between my teeth. She smiled faintly, looking at the water as if she hadn’t done anything. Then she lowered it along the inside of my thigh and stayed there, pressing and rubbing herself against me with indecent patience. Her hand surfaced for an instant to brace itself on the edge, and then her index finger touched my knee, then my thigh, then moved down again, always close to where I wanted it to be.

“It’s very hot tonight,” Camila said, referring to the water. But she was looking at me.

“Very,” I said, my voice lower than I expected.

There was a silence that lasted too long. Andrés withdrew his hand from Marina’s bikini with the same slowness with which he had slipped it in, as if it were the end of a sentence. Marina let out a very soft sigh and looked toward the ceiling. Her neck shone with sweat, and she wore a restrained smile I knew well: the smile she had when she liked something more than she had expected to.

Camila withdrew her foot without haste. It passed back along my thigh, paused again at my knee, then at my calf, and returned to her side of the jacuzzi. I felt my body trembling somewhere no one could see from outside.

Then Marina leaned forward, braced one hand on the stone edge, and looked at Andrés with a calm that undid me. He answered by touching her breast over the bikini, his whole palm weighing the flesh with a brazen possessiveness that made her gasp. Marina parted her legs a little inside the water, and Andrés took advantage, slipping his hand beneath the fabric and pushing the wet triangle aside with his knuckles. His fingers sank into Marina’s pussy, slowly at first and then with greater hunger, rubbing her clitoris with a precision that tore another brief, broken moan from her. The jacuzzi foam trembled around her body.

Meanwhile, Camila pulled one leg out of the water and rested it on the edge, opening herself farther in front of me. The edge of her bikini had shifted a few inches, and I could see the curve of her pubic mound, her shining skin, the shadow between her thighs. I caught her wrist when her hand lowered to my trunks and left it there, exploring the hardness of my cock through the fabric. The brush of her fingers was enough to make me clumsy. I bit my tongue so I wouldn’t tell her to take it out, to touch me for real. She seemed to read me anyway, because she slid her hand beneath the elastic and gripped my cock along its entire length, with a satisfied sigh she barely hid behind a soft laugh.

“Fuck…” she murmured, this time without taking her eyes off me.

I answered by putting my hand beneath the water and seeking her sex. Her pussy was already very hot, slippery, swollen with moisture and arousal. I ran two fingers over the opening, feeling it part at my touch, and she threw her head back with a trembling exhalation. The water covered part of her crotch, but not all of it. I was able to spread her lips farther and feel the thick wetness, the sensitive tip of her clitoris throbbing beneath my fingers. Camila arched slightly, bracing one hand on my shoulder so she wouldn’t sink.

“More,” she told me, almost soundlessly.

And I gave it to her. I rubbed in short, firm up-and-down movements until her thighs began to open from sheer need. She released my cock only to lower her head and kiss me fiercely, her mouth still wet with water and wine, thrusting her tongue into me as if she wanted to steal my breath. I answered by squeezing her ass beneath her bikini, filling my palm with that round, taut flesh, and felt her nipples stiffen beneath the black fabric.

Marina wasn’t pretending anything anymore. Andrés had pulled her bottom bikini down completely and had her braced against the edge, partly turned away from the garden, while he opened her pussy with one hand and licked it with obscene slowness. She had one hand in his hair and the other dug into the stone. Each time he sucked hard on her clitoris, Marina raised her hips a little higher, as if she wanted to push his face between her legs herself. Her moans mingled with the jacuzzi’s jets, louder, more broken, utterly shameless.

Camila pulled away from my mouth only to speak into my ear.

“I want your cock inside me,” she said, direct and unadorned.

I tugged her trunks off beneath the water. I brought it out with my hand, hard and pulsing, and she let out an almost animalistic “yes” when the head of my cock brushed her entrance. I moved her bikini aside, spread her legs wide, and penetrated her slowly, feeling her pussy embrace it, hot and tight, while the water surged around our bodies. She gripped my shoulders hard, digging her nails into me, and I began moving my hips slowly at first, deep, entering all the way and withdrawing just enough to thrust back in.

“Like that… like that, don’t stop,” she panted.

The sound of wet flesh was minimal, but I felt everything: the pressure of her vaginal lips sliding along the shaft of my cock, the shudder of every thrust, the way she squeezed me when she tightened her abdomen. Camila lifted one leg and hooked it around my waist, opening herself even farther. I began fucking her harder, making the water splash over the edge. She threw her head back, breathing with her mouth open, and rubbed her clitoris over my hand so she could come first, quickly, convulsing around my cock. I felt her whole body tremble, her pussy contracting in wet spasms that nearly made my head come off.

“Now you,” Marina said, her voice hoarse.

Andrés stood up inside the jacuzzi with brutal calm, gripped his already-stiff cock, and rubbed it against Marina’s pussy, soaking everything before slipping the tip inside. She received him with a short moan, and he penetrated her slowly—slowly at first—until her body yielded with a visible shudder. He pushed all the way in, bracing one hand on her hip to keep her still, and began fucking her standing up, with firm thrusts that made the water slap against the stone walls.

Marina’s head was thrown back, her mouth half-open, her nipples hard and pointing beneath the fabric that no longer covered anything. Andrés grasped her hips and lifted her slightly, changing the angle to go deeper. She cried out when the tip struck the inside of her pussy, then surrendered herself to the rhythm. She threaded her fingers into the back of his neck and kissed him furiously, licking his mouth as if she wanted to swallow his breath while he kept thrusting in and out with a savage cadence.

Camila held my face between her hands.

“Look at me when I come,” she ordered.

I obeyed. I fucked her harder, faster, driving my cock into her until she began to squeal softly, first with something like laughter and then no longer laughing, only making the wet sound of her pussy swallowing me. My hips collided with hers at every thrust, and she came apart beneath me, her nails leaving marks on my back, her body rigid just before breaking. When she came, her face changed completely: mouth open, eyes closed, legs convulsing around my waist. I held her through the trembling and kept thrusting, because I wasn’t finished yet.

Marina searched for my eyes over Andrés’s shoulder and smiled like a happy, shameless bitch, full of sweat, water, and desire. He was fucking her hard now, without restraint, and she clung to the edge to take him better. Her legs trembled with every movement of his hips, and when Andrés leaned over to bite her neck, Marina let out a long moan that struck my cock like a jolt. Camila, still sensitive, pulled me by the neck to kiss me again. Her mouth was open and salty, and she sucked my tongue while I kept fucking her, burying myself in her pussy until I felt my whole body was about to explode.

“Don’t stop,” she repeated, now almost crying with pleasure.

And I didn’t stop. I held her by the waist and brought her against the edge of the jacuzzi for support, driving my cock into her at an even harder rhythm, feeling her clitoris rub against my belly with every stroke. Her breathing became erratic, and suddenly she dug her heels into my lower back, squeezing with desperate force that made me lose control. I felt her tense, come again in small spasms, and that second of contraction pushed me to the edge. I clenched my teeth, grabbed her ass, and came inside her, a thick ejaculation tearing through me as I kept thrusting slowly to push in as much semen as possible.

Camila remained trembling, her forehead pressed to my chest. Behind Marina, Andrés gave a low growl and came too, gripping her hips with both hands as he filled her with a dry violence. Marina stayed still, breathing with difficulty, feeling Andrés’s ejaculation continuing to pulse inside her. Then she turned slightly, looked at me, and for a second we weren’t a couple, or strangers, or anything we had been before. We were only two sweaty, satisfied bodies that had just opened a door.

They got up first. Andrés approached Marina, leaned down, and said something in her ear. Marina nodded. I never found out what he had said. I never asked. Camila climbed out of the water in a movement that seemed choreographed, picked up her towel, and wrapped it around her waist. Before leaving, she looked at me one last time from the doorway. A look that didn’t say “see you later.” It said something else.

“Rest well,” Andrés said in a neutral voice, and they left.

***

The room fell silent. Only the sound of the water moving remained. Marina and I stayed there for a full minute without speaking, looking at each other. Then she came closer. She crossed the jacuzzi and climbed on top of me, her legs on either side of mine, her hands on my shoulders, her face very close to mine.

“Did you see everything?” she asked softly.

“Everything.”

“And?”

“I want you to tell me what he whispered in your ear.”

Marina laughed. A low laugh pressed against my neck.

“Tomorrow,” she said. “Tonight I want you all to myself.”

She kissed me. It was a long kiss, tasting of wine and something I didn’t know how to name and had probably never felt before. The water continued bubbling around us, concealing what no longer needed to be concealed. When we returned to the room, Marina locked the door from the inside. And what happened afterward had to do with them and, at the same time, had nothing to do with them.

It belonged to the two of us. As it always had. Only now we had something more: an image preserved, a shared secret, a night neither of us would ever tell anyone about but would remember every time we returned to a jacuzzi.

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