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My Son-in-Law Came Looking for Me in the Kitchen While They Slept

Marisol's house had always been a haven of order, but ever since her daughter Lucía and her husband Adrián had moved in to get through the final stretch of the pregnancy, the air had felt heavy. That night the silence was almost solid, broken only by the hum of the humidifier and the drip of a poorly closed faucet.

Marisol shifted between the cold sheets. Rubén was hundreds of miles away, sleeping in the cab of his truck. She loved him; he was a good man, but their relationship had become as predictable as her husband's routes. At fifty-one, she felt that her body—that geography of mature curves that still attracted glances at the hospital—was being wasted on the routine of shifts and the loneliness of the bed. For months she hadn't come with anyone but her own fingers, and that night even masturbating had left a bitter aftertaste: the three quick orgasms she'd torn from herself lying on her back, legs spread and her clitoris swollen beneath her index finger, had been more of a technical release than real pleasure. Her pussy was still throbbing, soaked and unsatisfied.

It was three in the morning. She got up to fetch a glass of water to soothe the heat of the night. She was wearing a pearl-colored silk nightgown, a garment she'd bought hoping to rekindle a spark in Rubén, only for it to end up banished to a drawer. The fabric was fine, almost translucent, and clung to her hips with an honesty that needed no mirrors. Beneath the silk she wore nothing: her nipples stood hard against the fabric, and the wetness between her thighs threatened to soak through the nightgown's skirt.

As she went down the stairs, a dim light illuminated the kitchen. Adrián was there, his back to her, drinking water from a pitcher and dressed only in dark boxers. Marisol froze in the doorway. Beneath the extractor hood's light, her son-in-law's body looked like a sculpture of fiber and sinew: defined chest, smooth brown skin gleaming with heat. The boxers clung to his hard buttocks and, when he turned slightly, Marisol made out the heavy bulge hanging between his thighs, asleep but promising.

“Adrián?” she whispered, though her voice sounded raspier than she'd intended.

He spun around and set the pitcher on the counter. His tired eyes traveled over Marisol from head to toe. The nightgown concealed nothing: the full shape of her breasts, the darkness of her nipples beneath the fabric, the denser shadow of the triangle between her thighs.

“Sorry, I didn't mean to wake anyone,” he said, but he didn't move. Marisol clearly saw his cock beginning to swell beneath the cotton of his boxers: a bulge that grew by the second until it showed against his left thigh, thick, long, impossible to hide.

“Don't worry. I couldn't sleep either,” she replied, taking a step inside. Her nipples, already irretrievably hard, showed like two dark pebbles in the silk.

The distance between them narrowed. The contrast was brutal: Marisol's voluptuous maturity against Adrián's sharp youth. Upstairs, Lucía slept, unaware of the high-voltage current running through the kitchen.

“That color looks good on you,” Adrián blurted, his voice a declaration of war against propriety. His eyes dropped unabashedly to his mother-in-law's nipples and then, for a second, to the hollow between her thighs.

Marisol felt a shiver that had nothing to do with the weather. She knew she should turn around, but her feet refused to obey. For the first time in years she felt seen. Not as a mother, not as a nurse, not as the wife of an absent trucker. She felt desired. She felt a hot thread sliding down the inside of her thigh and pressed her lips together so she wouldn't moan.

***

During the following week, the atmosphere in the house became electric. Every encounter in the hallway, every dinner Rubén missed, was a minefield. Marisol began paying unusual attention to details, to lingerie that made her walk with a more feline confidence.

One Tuesday, while Lucía slept through one of her heavy naps, Adrián worked in the living room with his laptop. Marisol entered with a basket of clean laundry and, when she bent over, her blouse pulled away from her body, revealing the curve of her cleavage. He stopped typing.

“A lot of work?” she asked without looking at him, knowing perfectly well that he was watching.

“I can't concentrate,” he admitted with a frankness that made her shiver. “It's too hot in this house.”

Marisol bent a little farther, letting the blouse fall completely open. Her mature tits, braless, were visible for one long moment: two heavy breasts with broad brown nipples already hardened. She heard Adrián's breathing catch. When she straightened, the basket balanced on her hip, she saw the hard bulge pushing against her son-in-law's fly. She said nothing. She licked her lips and left the living room, swaying her ass with calculated slowness.

That same night, alone in her bed, she thrust three fingers into her soaked pussy, imagining Adrián's hard cock impaling her against the counter, and came biting the pillow.

On Thursday the situation escalated. Marisol was preparing dinner in a knit dress that emphasized all her voluptuousness when Adrián came up behind her to reach a glass from the upper cabinet. He didn't ask permission: he stretched over her, trapping her for a moment between his body and the counter. Marisol felt his hard cock clearly against her ass, pushing through the fabric of his pants.

Marisol turned slowly and found herself trapped in that tiny space. Her breasts brushed the young man's firm chest. Adrián's swollen shaft now pressed against her belly.

“Adrián, this isn't right...” she said, though instead of pushing him away, her hands came to rest on his tense arms.

“I know,” he replied, lowering his voice. “But Lucía doesn't even let me touch her anymore. And you... you're so real. I get hard just watching you walk around this fucking house.”

Adrián's hand dropped to her hip and barely squeezed the soft flesh. Then it rose, covered an entire breast over the dress, and pinched her nipple between thumb and forefinger. Marisol let out a broken sigh and involuntarily thrust her hips forward, rubbing her pussy against his bulge. At that moment they heard Lucía's bed creak and heavy footsteps toward the bathroom. They sprang apart like teenagers caught in the act, but desire was no longer a suspicion: it was a physical certainty. Marisol brought a hand to her still-tingling nipple and felt that her panties had become drenched.

***

Dinner passed in tense silence. Lucía, sitting with her legs spread beneath the table to accommodate her belly, sighed between bites.

“My ribs are burning, Mom. I feel like the baby won't even let me breathe,” she complained, pushing aside her half-finished plate.

Marisol nodded with the mechanical smile she used with difficult patients. At that moment her phone vibrated: a video call from Rubén, his round face lit by the yellowish light of a gas station.

“Hi, sweetheart,” he said with a sigh. “Here I am, dead tired. Tomorrow I'm heading north, if my body holds up.”

While he complained about his digestion, Marisol felt Adrián's gaze fixed on her, unconsciously comparing Rubén's decline with the fullness she still radiated. Beneath the table, her son-in-law's bare foot traveled up her calf and slipped between her knees, pushing them apart. Marisol held her breath and ended the call quickly.

Lucía retired early, defeated by back pain. In the bedroom, when Adrián brushed her thigh, she pulled away as if he'd burned her.

“No, please. I feel heavy, everything hurts,” she said, turning her back.

Adrián stared at the ceiling, pulse racing and cock hard against the fabric of his pajama bottoms. Lucía's rejection, added to the image of Marisol downstairs, had pushed him to the limit. He slipped a hand beneath the elastic, gripped his shaft, and began masturbating silently while thinking about his mother-in-law's tits. He stopped before coming, wiped his hand on the sheet, and got up. He went into the hallway with the bulge still showing.

Marisol was already ready to leave for the hospital. Beneath her white uniform, like a guilty secret, she'd put on a black lace set she never wore to work. She was fastening her jacket when she saw Adrián come downstairs, wearing only pajama pants, his cock showing shamelessly.

“She's fallen asleep,” he said, his voice heavy with frustration. “Or she's pretending to.”

“It's the pregnancy. Be patient,” she replied, though her gaze inevitably dropped to his bulge.

“It's not just the pregnancy. I feel alone in this house, and I see you... and I go crazy. My cock gets hard as a rock and I have to jerk off in the bathroom.” He took a step, invading her space.

“I have to go, I'm late for my shift,” she whispered, but she didn't open the door.

Adrián's breath brushed her ear. His firm, warm hand rested for a moment over hers on the doorknob. The other dropped and squeezed one entire buttock over the skirt of her uniform, marking the flesh. Marisol didn't pull away. She felt him squeeze her ass, felt him rub his stiff cock against her hip for a second, and came close to dropping her bag and kneeling right there to pull it out and suck him down to the throat. Instead, she stepped into the cold night air with her heart pounding and her lace panties already stuck to the lips of her pussy, knowing that when she returned, with Lucía at her medical appointment and the house silent, the thread would snap forever.

***

Dawn brought a deceptive calm. Marisol returned from the hospital at eight, her body exhausted but her mind alight. The silence confirmed that the plan had worked: Lucía had left early for her checkup, and Rubén was still on the road.

Adrián was in the kitchen, seated with a cup between his hands and wearing only gray sweatpants. Beneath the thin fabric, his already half-awake cock showed with brutal clarity, thick and pointing toward his hip.

“They're gone,” he said. His voice was a low growl.

Marisol answered with no words. She set her bag on a chair. The morning light highlighted the transparency of her uniform, beneath which the black lace could be made out like a shadow.

“I'm exhausted,” she whispered, though her eyes challenged him from a few inches away.

“You don't look like you want to sleep,” he replied.

Adrián stood and wrapped his arms around her waist, shoving her against the cold granite counter. She gasped when his fingers found the zipper of her uniform and opened it in a single pull. The fabric fell open, revealing a black lace bra that barely contained her heavy tits. Adrián yanked the cups down and freed her breasts, sucking hungrily on one nipple, pulling hard and nibbling, while his other hand slipped inside her panties and found a shaved, drenched pussy, its lips swollen and hot.

“Fuck, look at you...” he growled, plunging two fingers into her. “You're dripping, mother-in-law. You've been wet for me all night, haven't you?”

“Shut up... for God's sake, shut up and fuck me already,” she panted, throwing her head back.

Adrián pulled her uniform all the way down and left her dressed only in black lace. He ripped off her panties, throwing the fabric onto the floor, and opened her legs with his knees. He knelt first: he lifted her by the thighs, draped them over his shoulders, and buried his face between his mother-in-law's legs. He licked her hungrily, his whole tongue flat against her pussy, sucking her outer lips, thrusting his hard tongue into the opening, then moving up to her swollen clitoris and sucking it until Marisol had to bite her fist to keep from screaming. He inserted two fingers and curled them, searching inside for her sweet spot while continuing to suck her clitoris. Marisol came in his mouth in less than a minute, her legs trembling and her hands buried in his black hair.

“Fuck me,” she begged, her voice in tatters. “Fuck me now, please.”

Adrián stood, pulled down his sweatpants, and finally showed her the cock he'd been keeping concealed: thick, long, with a prominent vein and a glans already shining with pre-cum. Marisol licked her lips when she saw it. She lowered her hand, gripped it, weighed it, and slowly masturbated him twice to feel its thickness between her fingers.

“It's enormous, fuck...” she murmured. “Rubén's isn't even half that size.”

“Shut up and spread your legs.”

He sat her on the counter and parted the lips of her pussy with two fingers. He placed the glans at her soaked entrance, pushed for a second to coat himself in her fluids, and penetrated her in one thrust, sinking to the base. The impact tore a deep moan from Marisol that echoed through the kitchen's silence. She felt the shaft opening her, felt it reach the depths, felt it making room in a pussy that had been accustomed to less for years. She arched her back and dug her hands into his arms for support. Adrián set a frantic pace, pulling almost all the way out and driving back in to the balls, while her mature body absorbed every thrust, wrapping him in a warmth he'd never known. Marisol's tits bounced with every thrust, and he bent down to bite them, suck her nipples, and leave marks on her cleavage.

“That's it... that's it, you son of a bitch... harder...” she moaned, not recognizing her own voice.

“You like your son-in-law's cock, huh? Say it. Say you like me putting it in you.”

“I love it... I love your cock... put it in deeper...”

“Marisol...” he panted, burying his face between her breasts and biting the skin of her neck.

The rhythm against the counter became insufficient. He forced her to turn; she braced her hands against the granite and leaned forward, sticking out her ass. Adrián spread her buttocks with both hands, spit onto her open pussy, and possessed her again with an even deeper thrust, reaching a spot that tore a muffled howl from her. He gripped her hips and pounded her with hard strokes, his balls striking her clitoris with every thrust. He reached around, pinched her nipples, and then brought his hand to her mouth.

“Suck them,” he ordered, pushing three fingers into her mouth.

Marisol sucked the fingers soaked with her own fluids while he continued driving into her from behind. She felt Adrián's open palm smack her left buttock and then the right, leaving the marks burning.

“Don't stop... don't stop, please... I'm going to come again...” she begged in a broken whisper.

Marisol felt the climax forming in her belly like a heavy, electric wave, coiling in her lower abdomen and climbing her spine. Just as pleasure overwhelmed them both, the sound of an engine came from the driveway.

Adrián tensed to the limit and buried himself one last time with a muffled groan. Marisol felt his cock grow larger inside her a second before it burst, then felt the hot jets filling the depths of her pussy, one release after another, making her come as well, squeezing her vaginal walls around the shaft that continued emptying inside her. Then a car door slammed, shattering the spell.

“Mom! I'm back!” Lucía's voice rang out from the garden.

Panic and ecstasy mingled in the air.

“Go upstairs... quickly!” Marisol whispered, trying to fasten her zipper with clumsy fingers. She felt her son-in-law's semen sliding down the inside of her thigh and wiped it away with a kitchen towel.

Adrián pulled up his sweatpants, crossed the living room in silence, and disappeared upstairs only seconds before the key turned in the lock.

***

Lucía entered with her heavy gait, swaying her body to compensate for the weight of her belly, and collapsed into a chair.

“Whew, it's hot in here. It smells strange... kind of stuffy.”

“I fried something for breakfast, sweetheart. How did the monitors go?” Marisol's voice sounded a little higher than usual, but her daughter was too absorbed in her own discomfort. Marisol squeezed her thighs together: she could still feel the semen trickling inside her, hot and sticky.

“Fine, the baby is perfect, but I can't take it anymore. Where's Adrián?”

“He's upstairs. I think he was taking a shower,” Marisol lied, feeling her heart lurch.

Lucía sighed with a bitterness her mother knew well. “He's unbearable lately. He doesn't even touch me. I know I look like a monster, but he doesn't even look at me affectionately. Thank goodness I have you. You're the only person I can trust.”

That sentence struck Marisol harder than any insult. She looked at her daughter—swollen, vulnerable, deceived—and felt a real stab of guilt. But when she placed a hand on her shoulder, Adrián's scent rose from her own wrist and she pulled it away as if burned. And beneath her skirt, another thread of semen slid down to her knee.

“It's a difficult stage. Men don't always know how to handle these things,” she said, guilt gnawing at her stomach.

***

Night came. Lucía had gone to bed early. Marisol was in the living room, pretending to read, when Adrián came downstairs. There were no words. He sat beside her, close enough for their thighs to brush, and began lifting the hem of her skirt with torturous slowness. His hand climbed past her thigh until it found her new panties, already dampened simply by having him near.

“I haven't been able to stop thinking about this morning,” he whispered. “About the way you squeezed me with your pussy. About how you begged for more.”

Marisol closed the book. She knew crossing that line a second time, with Lucía sleeping only a few feet away, was madness with no way back. But when his fingers pushed aside the silk of her underwear and found her slippery clitoris, all she could do was throw her head back and spread her legs farther. Adrián slid two fingers inside her, then three, up to the knuckle, and began fucking her with his hand in silence while biting her neck.

“She's asleep,” he continued, kissing her cleavage and pulling down the neckline of her dress to free one breast. “And I need you.”

He sucked her nipple until it turned purple. Marisol lowered her hand and found his cock already ready; she pulled it from his pants and gripped it whole. She knelt between his legs on the carpeted floor and put it in her mouth without further detours. She licked the glans first, tasting the salty fluid, then swallowed him until she gagged. Adrián gripped the back of her head and began fucking her mouth slowly, sinking to her throat. Marisol sucked his balls, licked them one by one, climbed back up his shaft, tracing the vein with her tongue, and took him into her mouth again, cheeks hollowed, saliva running down her chin.

“Fuck, you suck it so well... much better than Lucía...” he panted.

She looked up at him, eyes glazed and mouth full of cock, and answered with a muffled moan that vibrated along his entire shaft. Adrián was about to come in her mouth, but he pulled her away by the hair, lifted her, and flipped her onto the sofa.

The danger, far from intimidating them, acted as fuel. Adrián stripped off her underwear, sat on the sofa, and sat her on top of him astride, letting gravity do the work. Marisol lowered herself slowly, impaling herself inch by inch on his enormous cock, feeling it invade her, opening her, expanding her limits in a way Rubén had never managed. When she was down to the base, motionless with his entire shaft buried inside her, she dug her nails into his shoulders to keep from screaming and began to move.

She rode her son-in-law in silence, rising and falling, tightening her pussy on every downward stroke to squeeze him harder. Adrián seized her tits, kneaded them, and cruelly pinched her nipples. Then he grabbed her by the nape and forced her to look at him while he possessed her with an unrelenting rhythm, thrusting upward and driving into her whenever she came down. The sofa creaked. Marisol bit her lips until they bled. He spit into her mouth, she swallowed it, and continued riding him.

“Fuck my ass...” she whispered in his ear, in a voice she didn't recognize as her own. “Not now, another day... put your cock up my ass...”

“Anything you want, mother-in-law. I'm going to fuck you everywhere.”

Pleasure rose, a tide of heat made even more intense by the risk of discovery. Marisol felt the climax strike her with unfamiliar violence and came clinging to his neck, trembling all over, her pussy walls squeezing the shaft in waves. Adrián choked against her shoulder and came too, firing his semen inside her for the second time that day, so deep she felt it in her stomach.

Then they heard Lucía's clumsy footsteps upstairs heading toward the bathroom, followed by the sound of the toilet flushing. Their room to maneuver shrank to seconds.

“Mom? Are you still awake?” Lucía's voice was already halfway down the stairs.

Adrián grabbed his pants and disappeared through the back door leading to the garden in complete silence, his cock still dripping and semen trickling down the inside of his thigh. Marisol seized the sofa blanket and wrapped herself in it, covering her nakedness, just as her tired daughter appeared in the doorway and switched on the light. Between her thighs, Adrián's warm semen continued leaking out in small amounts, soaking the sofa beneath the blanket.

“What are you doing here in the dark?” Lucía asked, supporting her back.

“I fell asleep reading, sweetheart,” she managed to say, her voice a mixture of breathlessness and false calm.

Lucía wrinkled her nose. “It smells strange. Have you been cleaning?”

“I spilled some hospital disinfectant when I put down the bag. You know what I'm like.”

The irony was cruel: Lucía was suffering from her husband's lack of attention while Marisol, beneath the blanket, had the trace of sin stuck to her own flesh, her son-in-law's cock still leaking inside her.

“Go to bed, sweetheart. I'll finish tidying up and come up,” she said urgently.

When Lucía disappeared, Marisol let out the breath she'd been holding. She looked at herself in the sideboard mirror: there was a wild gleam in her eyes she didn't recognize, her lips were swollen, and a purple mark stained her neck. The betrayal was complete, but the pleasure had been too real for her to regret it.

***

The next morning, as they ate breakfast amid a painful semblance of normality, the roar of a heavy engine and the hiss of air brakes shattered the neighborhood's peace: Rubén's truck had just pulled up outside.

He came in like a whirlwind of exhaustion and good humor, his belly stretching the buttons of his plaid shirt and carrying that diesel smell. He planted a loud kiss on Marisol and another on his daughter. Beside the memory of Adrián's firm skin, Rubén's felt soft and neglected.

“Hi, Adrián! How's work going? Give your father-in-law a shake,” Rubén said, devouring some toast.

Adrián shook his hand with cold courtesy. Then Marisol felt something on her leg: beneath the tablecloth, her son-in-law's foot had found hers and climbed her calf with an audacity that stole her breath. His bare foot reached the inside of her thigh, pushed aside her skirt, and pressed his big toe against the damp bulge of her panties, rubbing her clitoris slowly.

“Is something wrong? You're very quiet,” Rubén said, looking at her with his kind eyes.

“No, nothing... I'm glad you're back,” she managed to say, feeling Adrián's foot rub her pussy through her underwear while her husband chewed two yards away. She felt a little spurt escape and squeezed her thighs around her son-in-law's foot, trapping it.

Adrián smiled faintly over the rim of his cup, knowing that in that house the established order had just died forever.

***

Midday advanced beneath a fictitious calm. Rubén had shut himself in the bathroom for one of his long showers, while upstairs Lucía rearranged the baby's room. Marisol was washing dishes when she felt the heat of a young body pressing against her back.

Adrián didn't approach stealthily, but with the arrogance of someone who knew he owned the situation. Through her thin satin pajamas, she felt the pressure of his erection settling between her buttocks, so hard it hurt.

“For God's sake... Rubén is right there, he'll hear you,” she whispered, though her treacherous body arched, seeking contact and pushing her ass backward.

“I don't care,” he growled in her ear, grabbing her tits from behind and squeezing them with both hands. “I've spent all morning watching the way you move in front of him. And I'm thinking about what you asked me for last night.”

“I was crazy last night...”

“And you are today too.”

With suicidal audacity, while the shower water could be heard only a few feet away, Adrián yanked down her pajama pants and panties and caressed her entire ass. He spread her buttocks with his hands, bent down, and ran his tongue over her hole. Marisol shuddered and smothered a moan against the dishcloth. He licked her slowly, without hurry, coating her anus with saliva and pushing the tip of his tongue inside until the muscle began to relax. He stood, spat on the opening to lubricate it further, gripped his cock, and rubbed it between her buttocks, sliding it up and down, passing it over her soaked pussy to lubricate it and returning to her ass.

“I'm thinking about what you asked me for,” he repeated, pressing the glans against her closed anus.

“No! Not there, not yet!” she exhaled, with a moan of pain and surprise as the tip began opening her sphincter.

But her protests were fuel. He grabbed her shoulders, forcing her to brace herself against the sink, arched his hips, and continued pushing slowly but without stopping, forcing the hole to yield. The entire glans went in first, with a fiery sting that made Marisol claw at the steel sink. Then the first inch, the second. Adrián didn't stop until he had buried himself completely, his balls resting against her soaked pussy.

“Fuck... fuck, you're so tight...” he panted against her nape. “Rubén has never put it in here, has he?”

“Never... I never dared...” she moaned, biting the dishcloth to muffle the sounds.

“Well, now you're going to have it every day.”

Marisol bit the cloth beside her to stifle a cry when he pulled his cock almost all the way out and drove it back in with one thrust. The initial pain was swallowed by a dark thrill: she was being possessed in the most forbidden way while her husband soaped himself on the other side of the hallway. Adrián reached around and began rubbing her clitoris with two fingers while fucking her ass, synchronizing the rhythm. Pleasure mixed with the burning, the shame, and the danger, and within minutes Marisol was coming again, howling into the cloth, her anus contracting around her son-in-law's cock.

The invasion didn't last long. The frantic rhythm and tension of the risk brought Adrián to the edge in only a few more minutes. She felt him tense, his fingers digging into her shoulders, and felt him spill inside her in several hot bursts that made her tremble from head to toe. She felt the jets filling her insides through an opening no one had ever entered before.

“Careful!” she managed to say when she heard the shower water cut off abruptly.

With the same speed with which he'd attacked, Adrián pulled his cock from her ass with a wet sound, pulled up his pants, and recovered his mask of indifference. Marisol hurriedly pulled up her pajamas, clenching her buttocks to hold back the semen threatening to run down her legs. Adrián moved toward the living room just as the bathroom door opened and Rubén emerged wrapped in a towel, completely unaware that his wife was still trembling against the counter, her ass burning and her pussy dripping.

“Ah, what bliss! I feel brand-new,” Rubén exclaimed, approaching from behind and placing a hand on her waist, the same waist Adrián had squeezed seconds earlier. “You look tense, sweetheart.”

“It's fatigue. Nothing else,” she managed to say, her voice hollow.

Rubén kissed the back of her neck and lowered his hand to squeeze one buttock over her pajamas. Marisol had to bite her tongue to keep from moaning in pain: her husband's hand was touching exactly the ass her son-in-law had just broken in.

Adrián entered already dressed, with a naturalness that seemed terrifying to Marisol. He took out a bottle of water and drank, watching over the container as Rubén embraced his wife and fondled the same ass he'd just been the first to claim.

“I hope that when you reach my age my daughter takes care of you like this,” Rubén said with a laugh.

Adrián lowered the bottle and gave his father-in-law a frosty smile, loaded with a meaning only Marisol could decipher.

“Don't worry, Rubén. I know perfectly well what I have at home and what it takes to make everything work.”

Rubén planted a noisy kiss on his temple and went toward the living room, humming a song from the radio. Marisol and Adrián were alone again in the kitchen's silence. When she glanced at her son-in-law, she saw in his eyes that this had been nothing more than the beginning: the danger of being discovered seemed to have awakened an even more dangerous ambition in him. And she felt another thread of semen escape her ass beneath her pajamas and run down her thigh.

TO BE CONTINUED

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SummerHeat

okay that kitchen scene had me holding my breath. so so good

WeakInTheKnees

Please tell me theres a part two, i NEED to know what happens next

NatalieJ

the tension here is incredible. you build it up without rushing anything, which is honestly rare. loved it

BoredAtWork

found this on my lunch break and now i cant focus on anything lol

LateNightScroll

read this at 2am and now im wide awake. no regrets

MidnightReader

the atmosphere in this is just perfect. one of my favorites on here

Emma_London

something about forbidden situations written this well just gets under your skin. bookmarked immediately

RacingHeart

honestly one of the best ive read here in a while. the realism is what does it for me, it just feels true

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