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The Game My Husband Proposed in Punta Cana

Punta Cana smelled of salt, sunscreen, and something I had never known how to name until that week. The sea rolled onto the sand with a slow, almost hypnotic whisper, and Mateo walked beside me with his hand brushing mine without quite taking it, as if we had all the time in the world to make up our minds.

We had been married for six years and had come to escape routine, yes, but also with an idea that had kept us awake for months. Hidden in the suitcase among our clothes was a cheap cardboard-covered notebook: a challenge manual for couples that we had ordered online and neither of us dared fully open.

—Just the first three levels —I told him on the plane, while my fingers traced slow circles over his thigh beneath the newspaper he pretended to read.

He smiled without looking at me, but I noticed his jaw tense.

—You’re in charge —he replied quietly—. You rack up the points. I’ll reward you.

There was a tremor in his voice that gave him away: he wanted it as badly as I did, and it was twice as hard for him to hold himself back. I felt my pulse in my throat, my wrists, between my legs. A strange mixture of power and vulnerability, as if I were about to jump from a diving board without knowing whether there was water below.

It all began that very afternoon, on the beach.

***

I put on a tiny red bikini, made of a thin fabric that became faintly transparent when the sun hit it at a certain angle. The straps marked my skin every time I moved. The heat was a second layer over my body, and the hot sand beneath my feet sent little shocks up my legs as we looked for a spot.

We chose a secluded area, though not so secluded that we would be invisible. That was the point. I felt a knot in my stomach. What if Mateo changed his mind when he saw me truly exposed? What if I was the one who changed my mind? But beneath the fear was something else, a hot current pushing me forward.

—First challenge —I whispered—. An accidental slip. Deliberately accidental.

He bit his lip and nodded. His breathing was already faster than normal.

I lay down on the towel and arched my back under the pretense of putting on lotion, my fingers sliding slowly over my shoulders, leaving a shiny, perfumed trail. With a practiced movement, I tugged at the tie holding up the bikini top. The fabric gave way. The salty air brushed my breasts and they hardened instantly, an electric tingling that traveled down to the center of my body.

I wasn’t alone in my little accident. A group of tourists a few yards away suddenly lowered their voices. A passing lifeguard stopped for longer than necessary and discreetly adjusted his shorts. I felt those looks like hands, and the adrenaline rose through me like champagne when a bottle is uncorked too quickly.

The arousing part wasn’t that they were looking at me. It was knowing that Mateo could see them looking at me, that his desire was growing beneath his swim trunks, and that he was still there anyway, letting me be the woman I otherwise would never have dared to be. I felt powerful and loved at the same time. I stayed like that a little longer than necessary, barely moving my hips, before tying the string again with deliberate slowness.

—Five points for me —I said.

He came closer, his voice hoarse.

—That was… —he swallowed—. Tonight I’ll give you the massage you like. Slowly.

I kissed him deeply, with tongue, savoring the salt on his lips, and my hand dipped down for a second to confirm what I already knew: he was hard as a rock. The adventure had barely begun, and I was already trembling.

***

At sunset we moved to the beach bar. It smelled of rum and lime, and the waves provided the background like a heartbeat. We ordered two icy margaritas that burned our throats with their sheer sweetness, and I sat on a tall stool, crossing my legs so the sarong would ride up and reveal a little bronzed thigh and the edge of my black thong.

—Next challenge —Mateo said, his hand firm on my knee, moving up barely an inch—. A picture. From the bathroom.

I went to the restrooms. The mirror was fogged by steam from the pool showers. In the reflection I saw my hair tousled by the breeze, my lips swollen and glossy. I took off my sarong, the fan’s air raising goosebumps on my skin, and posed with one hand barely covering a breast and the other sliding between my legs. I took the picture, feeling my own wetness against my fingers.

I sent it to him. While I waited for his reply, an unexpected tenderness swept over me: this wasn’t just a dirty game. It was absolute trust, surrendering ourselves to each other in a way we didn’t know how to name.

I returned to the bar with my heart pounding in my ears. I found him holding his phone, breathing quickly.

—My love, that picture drove me crazy —he said, his voice cracking a little—. Reward: tonight I’ll lick you slowly, but I won’t let you finish.

Beside us, a local man with tattooed arms that smelled of salt and tobacco had noticed the chemistry between us and was smiling. I leaned toward Mateo and spoke right against his ear.

—Look at him. Does it turn you on that he’s looking at me?

He swallowed. His answer was so honest it almost hurt.

—Yes. Show yourself a little. But only because I know you’ll come back to me.

I turned toward the stranger and winked at him, raising my glass in a silent toast. The cold liquid slid down my throat as his gaze darkened. The air thickened with something heavy. My body throbbed with desire, but my heart beat for Mateo—for his courage in allowing me this, for what bound us together on such a fragile edge.

The guy came closer and brushed my arm “accidentally.” I let my leg touch his. Without words, I invited him into our game for a moment. I sat on Mateo’s lap, opening my legs slightly, and kissed him for a long, noisy moment while the stranger took a couple of pictures of us with our phone and our permission. My breasts pressed against his, my hips turning slowly, my sarong riding higher than was prudent.

When new people began coming in, we stopped. We straightened our clothes, the three of us raised our glasses, told him about the madness of our vacation with plenty of laughter, and said goodbye. Not before I took the stranger’s hand as I was leaving and let it drop for a moment down the small of my back. Then goodbye. Each of us went on with his own night.

***

The resort nightclub was the next setting. Neon lights pulsed to the rhythm of Latin music vibrating in my chest, the air dense with sweat and perfume, hot bodies brushing against one another in the darkness.

We danced pressed together, my hips against his, his erection pressing into my stomach and sending sparks up my spine. Before pulling away, I deliberately teased him: I slid my hands down his chest to his crotch, stroking him through his pants as we kissed deeply, biting each other’s lips. His hand slipped beneath my skirt, fingers traveling up my thigh to push aside my thong and touch me directly, right there in the middle of the dance floor, while I arched against him, dying from pleasure and danger.

—Twenty points if you do it —he said in my ear, his hot breath on my neck—. And the reward is that I’ll let you choose the next one.

I nodded, my heart beating like a drum and a knot of tenderness in my chest. Every step was a test of how much we trusted each other.

I pulled away and approached a group of three. The one doing most of the talking was tall and dark, his shirt open over a chest gleaming with sweat. Another tourist like us, but with hungry eyes. He was accompanied by an athletic blond and a third man with a mischievous smile and restless hands.

—Dance with me —I said to the dark-haired man over the music.

He came closer.

—Alone? Where’s your companion?

—Watching —I replied, rubbing my body against his in one fluid movement.

His friends joined in and closed me into a circle. The blond brushed my back with his hips, while the other whispered dirty things in my ear. We danced, their hands on my waist, my nipples hard beneath the thin fabric. I looked for Mateo at the bar. His eyes were fixed on us, a mixture of jealousy and desire that soaked me between the legs, but also a vulnerability that made me want to cross the dance floor and embrace him.

—You’re a tease —the dark-haired man murmured, nibbling my earlobe, his breath smelling of tequila.

—I’m only playing —I replied, turning so Mateo could see me arch my back, my hips making slow circles against all three of them.

It was intoxicating. Sweat running down my back, the music buried in my bones, strange hands exploring the edges of what was permitted. But the real rush, the one that truly consumed me, was knowing that Mateo was waiting for me and that this, instead of driving us apart, was making us stronger.

I pulled away with my legs trembling and went back to him.

—I can’t take any more —he confessed.

—Neither can I —I said—. I’m wet. Take me to the room.

We held hands and I counted the seconds until we reached the door.

***

The finale came the next day, on a small sailboat we rented to tour the coast. The salty wind whipped my hair, everything smelled of sea and hot wood, and the waves struck the hull like an accelerated heartbeat.

—Thirty more points —Mateo promised from the helm, his voice trembling— and you’ll have total control for the rest of the trip.

We started with pictures. First I posed in the bikini, arching my back, my legs crossed, the sun shining on my oiled skin. Little by little I raised the stakes: I untied the top and posed with my hands on my breasts, my nipples hard beneath the wind. Then I took off the rest and lay down at the bow, completely naked, the rocking of the boat lulling me like a slow cradle.

—One more picture —I asked, spreading my legs, with the turquoise sea stretching endlessly behind me.

He took out his phone with trembling hands.

—What if someone sees us from another boat?

—That’s what I like about it —I replied.

A yacht passed not far away, followed by a tourist boat. I felt distant eyes on me, and a shiver of pleasure ran through my entire body. We didn’t stop. Quite the opposite.

I knelt on the hot deck, lowered his shorts, and took him into my mouth, slowly at first and hungrily afterward, while he moaned and held on to the mast. Then he lifted me, turned me toward the bow, and entered me from behind, thrusting firmly, my breasts bouncing in rhythm with the swell. It was indescribable. So free, in the middle of the sea, with the water splashing over us and the sun burning our backs.

Whistles and an occasional burst of applause carried over from the nearby boats on the wind. A woman shouted something in English that I didn’t fully understand and didn’t care about. Mateo held my hips, I cried out with pleasure, and the whole world seemed to be watching us.

—Do you regret starting this? —I asked between gasps.

—Never —he said, his voice broken by something deeper than pleasure—. You’re my fantasy come true. I love you more than ever.

We came together, my cry vanishing over the water, while a couple of distant horns sounded as if they were applauding us. Every sense was saturated: his taste in my mouth, the smell of the sea on my skin, the waves and our moans mingling. But above all, the emotion: the desire that had grown with every challenge and the trust that grew more solid with every leap into the unknown.

That week in Punta Cana changed us. I accumulated points, yes, but we both won. We returned home different, with a shared secret no one else would ever know and the certainty that we still had a lot of notebook left to get through.

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