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What Happened in the Car After Our First Date

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I was still breathing hard when Lucía brought her lips to mine. She tasted like me, like salt, like something primitive that had no name but that I recognized instantly. Her pupils shone with that intensity that only appears when the body wants more and the mind has already stopped having an opinion. We kissed urgently, awkwardly, with our clothes still on, getting in the way of every attempt to feel each other’s skin.

Our tongues met halfway. The kiss was wet, deep, and every brush of her lips against mine raised the pace of my breathing as if someone were turning an invisible knob. I grabbed the back of her neck with my right hand, my fingers tangled in her short hair, and pulled her toward me hard.

But she slipped away.

She let herself fall back with a smile I was already starting to recognize. She placed her open palm on my chest to keep me at a distance while she leaned against the passenger door, half propped on the seat, half on the window. I tried to move closer again, but she shook her head without losing that smile.

She knew exactly what she wanted. And she was going to show me at her own pace.

With the hand that wasn’t holding me back, she brought her fingers to the button of her pants and opened it. The fabric parted by barely an inch, still held in place by the zipper. The gesture was slow, deliberate. She stared straight at me while she did it, gauging my reaction like someone watching a fuse catch fire.

The inside of the car had become something else. The air had layered itself with body heat, quickened breath, with that thick scent that only exists when two people have been wanting each other for a while. The windows were fogged up. I knew people outside could see us, and I realized that had stopped mattering a long time ago.

I held her gaze and took my hands to her zipper. I pulled it down slowly, carefully, as if I were unwrapping something fragile. Her panties showed beneath: white, cotton, unpretentious. Neither of us had planned this when we arranged to have coffee that afternoon. That was what made it so exciting. No lace, no preparation. Just what was happening.

Lucía unbuttoned the last button that was still fastened on her shirt. Her breasts peeked through the open fabric, still pressed by a simple bra that did nothing to hide how hard her nipples had become. She stroked them with her fingertips, pressing them together as she bit her lower lip. Then her tongue traced the corner of her mouth, wetting it, and that gesture sent a jolt straight down to my groin.

I grabbed the edge of her pants where they touched the seat. She raised her knees to make the movement easier, and I pulled the fabric down, dragging the panties with it without taking everything off. The jeans ended up halfway down her thighs, pinning her legs together.

Lucía was lying on her back, knees bent and her pants bunched halfway down her thighs. From where I was, the position didn’t look comfortable, but she couldn’t have cared less. She was squeezing her breasts with both hands without taking her eyes off me.

“Touch me,” she said in a rough voice I hadn’t heard before. “Please.”

Those words went straight through me. I couldn’t want her more than I did in that instant. From my position, there wasn’t much room for foreplay, so I got to the point.

I started stroking her sex with my fingers. Her lips were pressed tight by the pressure of the pants that kept her from spreading her legs, and that narrowness made every touch more intense. I ran my index finger up and down, slowly, along the full length. The smell hit me all at once: musky, intimate, so intense I thought it would be burned into my memory forever.

The wetness came immediately. First as a subtle sheen on my fingertips, then as something more generous that made every movement easier, letting me glide fluidly over her hot skin. She began to moan softly. Short sighs that accompanied every rise and fall of my fingers, as if her breathing were connected to the rhythm of my hand.

This is really happening.

I felt my erection swell again, pushing against the fabric of my pants with an almost painful urgency.

Lucía lifted her knees until they were close to her face, giving me perfect access without opening her legs. She watched me through the gap left by her thighs and the wrinkled denim, but she could do little more than surrender to whatever my fingers decided. Her eyes were half-closed and her mouth open.

Her fluids were plentiful. So much so that they began to run farther, sliding between her buttocks, pushed by the constant movement of my fingers. With my free hand I stroked the entrance to her ass. I didn’t penetrate. I only traced slow circles with my fingertip, spreading the moisture coming down from above, and that was enough to send her moans up a notch.

Then I slipped a finger inside her.

Slowly. Feeling the heat radiating from within her, that temperature that always surprises, that seems impossible. I went in as far as my hand would let me and paused for a second, letting her feel the full presence of the finger inside her. Then I pulled it all the way out, drawing her fluids with it, shining in the little light that came through the fogged windows.

I put it back in. And this time, when I reached the bottom, I used my thumb to brush her clit. I didn’t press. Just a light caress, almost a whisper of skin against skin.

“Ah, please,” she moaned in that deep voice that came from the back of her throat. That voice that sped up my pulse and made my whole body respond like an instrument tuned to her frequency.

I kept moving inside her with one finger for several more thrusts. Then, slowly, I slid in a second. The rhythm of my hand picked up a fraction, imitating the cadence of something larger, coming in and out while the fluids made each penetration sound wet and obscene in the silence of the car.

With both fingers inside, I brushed the entrance of her ass with more intent. I felt her clench instinctively, but she relaxed almost immediately as she felt the soft, steady pressure. Her fluids had reached that far and everything was slippery, hot. I knew that if I pushed, I’d get in without resistance, and I think she knew it too, because she opened her eyes and looked at me with a mixture of alarm and desire that made my hands shake.

I didn’t push. Not yet.

Instead, I pulled my fingers from inside her and brought them to my mouth. I sucked them eagerly, unhurried, closing my eyes as I tasted her. Salty. Thick. Addictive. I licked every finger joint, every fold of skin between my fingers, breathing in the scent that had concentrated there.

Lucía watched me with her mouth open.

I bent down until my face was in front of her sex. Open. Soaked. Pulsing. I stuck out my tongue and ran it all the way from her clit to her perineum. Slowly the first time, to get my bearings. Then with more pressure, more rhythm, letting my lips close over her and suck gently.

Her taste filled my mouth. Her fluids ran down my chin, mixed with my saliva, and I didn’t care. My tongue moved over her entire length, up and down, pausing on her clit to make tight circles and then sinking into her as far as I could.

“Don’t stop,” she murmured, and I felt her hand on the back of my neck pushing me against her.

I obeyed. I let myself be guided by the pressure of her fingers on my head, pushing me deeper, harder. Her breathing had turned irregular, broken, made of short gasps and words she couldn’t quite form. I could feel the contractions of her internal muscles against my tongue, more and more frequent, stronger and stronger.

The pressure of her hand on my nape became almost violent. She crushed my face against her sex, not giving me room to breathe, and I breathed as best I could, through the corners of my mouth, stealing hot gulps of air between one lick and the next. My nose against her pubic bone, my chin soaked, my hands gripping her hips.

The spasms started in her legs. I felt them trembling on both sides of my head, and then the wave rose through her abdomen, through her chest, until her whole body went rigid like a bowstring and stayed that way for three, four, five endless seconds. She convulsed against my mouth with a long, deep moan that filled the entire car.

She almost suffocated me. The pressure of her thighs against my cheeks and her hand on my neck wouldn’t let me pull my face away, and I had to wait for the orgasm to subside before I could really take a breath.

When she finally let go, I raised my head slowly. My face was soaked. I could feel the wetness from forehead to chin, shining in the little light from the parking lot. Lucía looked at me with glassy eyes and started laughing.

“You look like a kid who’s eaten an ice cream with no hands,” she said between gasps.

I laughed too. I didn’t know what to say, so I kissed her knee, which was the closest thing to me.

She lowered her legs and lay there for a moment, catching her breath. The seat was soaked. Our clothes were wrinkled, twisted, half on and half off. The car smelled of sex so intensely it felt like the cabin walls had soaked it in forever.

We cleaned ourselves up as best we could with some tissues I found in the glove compartment. They were those thin paper ones that tear at the slightest thing, so the result was more symbolic than effective. We looked at each other and laughed again.

I rolled the windows down. The night air rushed in, fresh, almost cold against my wet skin. We both took a deep breath, letting the clean oxygen gradually bring us back to reality: the empty parking lot, the orange streetlamps, the dashboard clock showing a time I didn’t want to look at.

Lucía pulled her pants back up without hurry, buttoning them with fingers still clumsy. She straightened her shirt, ran her fingers through her tousled hair, and looked at me.

Scene 4 of the story: What Happened in the Car After Our First Date
Y salió una segunda cita.

“Not bad for a first date,” she said.

“Second,” I corrected. “The first was coffee.”

She thought about it for a moment.

“No. Coffee was the excuse. This was the date.”

She started the car without saying anything else. I rolled the window all the way down and let the wind dry my face as she drove. I smelled like her. I tasted like her. And I knew, with that irrational certainty that only appears at three in the morning after something like that, that I was going to see her again.

I was definitely going back.

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