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Relatos Ardientes

When the Four of Us Ended Up Alone at Home

They had been friends since university, two couples who saw each other almost every weekend. Dinners, wine, the occasional card game that ended in confessions. And for months now, a game that always stopped halfway: a caress that lasted a second too long, a dirty joke, a hand that lingered where it shouldn’t and then pulled away as if nothing had happened. They had never gone all the way. That night, however, something in the air felt different from the very first toast.

They had turned off the big lights and left only the low lamps on. No one said it out loud, but all four knew this would be the night they stopped pretending.

Andrés came out of the bathroom wrapped in a towel, his hair still dripping onto his shoulders and his skin warm from the hot water. He had been out of the living room for barely ten minutes, but when he crossed the threshold he stopped dead.

Hugo was stretched out on the rug, breathless, with Sofía and Renata settled on either side of his body. They were kissing his neck and chest while one of them stroked his cock with her hand, unhurried, as if they had the whole night ahead of them.

Renata looked up first. She smiled with that calm, wicked expression Andrés already knew from the other times, the times when the game ended halfway through and everyone pretended nothing had happened.

—Right on time, love —she said.

Sofía ran her tongue over her lips. Her eyes were glassy, her breathing shallow.

—Come here —she murmured—. This time we’re really going to play, all four of us. No rules at all.

Andrés let the towel fall without saying a word. There was no need. His body responded on its own at the sight, and he took a step forward, but Sofía stopped him with the flat of her hand against his chest.

—Not so fast —she warned him—. First you watch us.

The two women sat up and knelt in front of the men, who were now standing, one beside the other. Sofía leaned over Andrés and took him all the way into her mouth, deep, while Renata did the same with Hugo. Then they switched slowly, letting their tongues cross in the middle, and the two men stood still, hips tight, letting them do as they pleased.

The rhythm was set by the women. Every time they felt one of them was close, they stopped and chuckled to themselves, then started again from the beginning.

***

—On the floor, both of you —Renata ordered, her voice hoarse.

Hugo and Andrés obeyed without arguing and lay down on their backs, side by side, on the living room rug. Sofía settled over Andrés’s face, putting her full weight on him, moving in slow circles against his mouth.

—Don’t stop —she asked him, her fingers tangled in his damp hair.

Renata did the same over Hugo. For a while the only sound in the room was the two women breathing hard, their hands braced against the walls to support themselves, their hips swaying. At the same time, each leaned forward and attended to the man on the other side with her mouth: Sofía to Hugo, Renata to Andrés, in a chain that linked the four of them in the same closed circle.

The men saw nothing but the curve of thighs over their faces, but they felt everything. The whole room had been reduced to heat, saliva, and weight.

***

Sofía and Renata looked at each other over the two stretched-out bodies. They didn’t need to say a word; that one look was enough to understand the game had just changed levels.

—Now we want to see you —said Renata, and the sentence hung in the air a moment too long.

They pushed Hugo and Andrés until they were kneeling, face to face. The two of them stared at each other. They had been friends for years, had shared beers, matches, trips with their partners. They had never crossed that line. Renata placed a hand on Andrés’s nape and guided him, slowly, without forcing him, giving him time to stop if he wanted to.

Andrés didn’t stop.

What came next wiped away in one blow the years of restrained laughter and sideways glances. Hugo accepted it with the same surrender. The two women remained kneeling at their sides, watching, hands between their own legs, directing things now and then with a stray word.

—Slower —one said.

—Like that, just like that —said the other.

Sofía positioned herself behind Andrés and sank two fingers into him, first carefully, then with more determination, while he kept focusing on Hugo. Renata repeated the gesture with her partner. The two men growled almost in unison, surprised by the pleasure hitting them from every side at once, no longer able to tell where each sensation was coming from.

***

The game kept escalating. The women arranged them on their sides, facing each other, in a position that tangled them completely, each one given over to the other and closely watched by them. Sofía and Renata, kneeling on both sides, touched themselves while they looked at the men.

—All the way —Sofía ordered, almost voiceless—. Don’t hold back now.

Hugo kept opening his eyes now and then to make sure this was really happening, that it wasn’t one of those fantasies people half-told and then never repeated out loud. It was real. The rug was warm beneath them, the two women were breathing above them, and there was no turning back.

***

After that came their turn, and they asked for it bluntly.

Sofía lay on her back in the center of the room and spread her legs as wide as she could. Her skin was flushed, her chest rising and falling fast.

—Both of you at once —she said, looking first at one and then the other—. Andrés in front. Hugo behind. I want to feel you together.

Andrés went in first. She threw her head back and let out a long sound that was neither quite pleasure nor quite anything else. Hugo took his time, just long enough for Sofía to push back toward him, asking for more without words, only with her body. When both of them were inside her, she stayed still for a second, as if measuring what she was feeling, and then she began to move between them.

The two men found a rhythm: first alternating, one and then the other, and later both at once, until Sofía stopped controlling anything. She clung to Andrés’s arms, bit Hugo’s shoulder, and when orgasm ran through her it was with her whole body, her legs clamping shut by instinct, trembling between the two of them.

—My turn now —said Renata from the side, having watched everything without touching herself, waiting her turn.

She took the same place as soon as Sofía rolled to one side, exhausted and satisfied. Renata wanted exactly the same thing, and she said so clearly. The men switched positions without needing to be told; by then they were moving as if they had been doing it all their lives. They took her with less gentleness, because she asked for it that way, her hands digging into their hips and her voice demanding more.

Renata came twice in a row, the second time almost without any break from the first, her body arched and her nails marking Andrés’s back.

***

From there on, the order was lost completely.

The four of them rolled across the rug, sweaty, sticky bodies searching for one another without a plan. There were no turns, no agreed positions, only hands, mouths, and skin changing partners every minute. Sofía was taking care of one while Renata kissed the back of his neck; Hugo ended up tangled with Andrés while one of them directed them with her voice; the two women kissed in the middle of the pile with their eyes closed.

At some point no one knew whose hand was whose anymore. The room smelled of sex and spilled wine, the lights were still on, and none of them even thought of turning them off. This had to be seen in full.

***

When the two men reached the limit, the women took control again. They put them on their knees, together, and knelt in front of them.

—Here —Renata asked, lifting her chin—. Both of you, on top of us.

Sofía and Renata touched each other while they waited, looking up at them from below. Hugo and Andrés finished almost at the same time, each with a low growl, and the women took everything between laughter and gasps, not moving away. Then they kissed, still trembling, sharing the taste of the night, rubbing their skin against each other.

The four of them collapsed into one heap, sweaty, spent. No one spoke. Only heavy breathing could be heard and, every so often, a weak laugh from sheer exhaustion.

Sofía stroked Hugo’s cheek with the tips of her fingers. Renata rested her forehead on Andrés’s shoulder and closed her eyes. None of them had any desire or reason to move.

That night they had crossed every line they had been circling for years without daring to cross. There was no modesty left, no shame left, no unanswered question left. Only four bodies that no longer remembered where one began and the other ended, and the calm certainty that, after that, nothing would ever be exactly the same between them again.

And yet, none of them regretted it.

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